Do you like these poems I wrote?

Poem No. 1 food in our faces and golf on TV probably soon see the beauty the day is blue and clear and wonderful sounds your ears will hear all going to go out and look for eggs that are hidden, but the inner is prohibited without a doubt What a fool want to miss this great day and now looks forward to this day Poem # There are two baskets filled with green eggs and all gather around this wonderful day, all feel the need to share and do things with love and care, we eat from the grid and is also under the blue sky is a beautiful Now we're ready for the home with Easter head thinking about the life ahead and what you can find "I'm in seventh grade and I know my poems are not perfect. However, 1-10, 10 being the best, what do these poems? Please be honest! Thanks!

Oh my gosh i love these two! It has the first of nine, the second of eight! PLEASE READ my question! thank you very much!

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